One word: structure.
Stories without structure go nowhere. Also, "story architect" sounds badass. And writing is all about stealing.
@klemay your chickie avatar is quite apt for this part of the thread :)
@dham I'm with you except for the low fat cheese bit (unless naturally occurring).
Pretty sure whole milk is 3%-3.5% fat (yep, just googled)...so not that much more than 1% or 2%, in the grand scheme of fat really (particularly when I used to think whole milk meant 'full fat' aka 100 PERCENT OF ALL THE FATS! ALL OF THEM!).
I personally can't stand skim or 1% and when I found out that whole milk was just a whopping percent and a bit of change fatter than those, I totally only go for whole milk now and forever!
This also makes the biggest difference in my latest cheese craze: string cheese! Low fat (mozz) string cheese can go suck a juicebox; I'd rather eat sawdust.
"Brecht's notion was that you had to break from the "rules" of your medium and directly antagonize your audience, and make explicit their personal complicity in whatever injustice is portrayed."
But...that's exactly what is different about her show:
"And you wanna go, "If you sat in my audience, and I cracked jokes and interacted with you with my pussy out, you'd probably feel pretty uncomfortable, so who's really getting the attention? Maybe I've actually put all the attention on you, sitting at a show watching a naked pussy.” Because I have all the power, I'm on stage, I have the microphone."
I don't get your point, despite liking all your big words.
It's so irritating to see so many people in that comment section telling her how to feel about something of which she just wrote an entire essay, detailing exactly how she felt and what she did about it.
Ain't no one got time for that!
Just to reiterate:
The only thing they could improve upon is color selection and, as mentioned upthread, the shininess. Otherwise? PERFECTION! I really don't give any fucks what the bra looks like because it is amazing and fits well and is THE most supportive friend my rack has ever had.
The smallest I have is a size 0 (34DD) in black, a size 1 (38DD) in black that I currently wear, and when I was heavier last year, I changed it up with an Ecru size 2 (38DDD/F).
I would never have worked out again and lost that weight if I did not have an Enell sports bra. The tits just DON'T move! And I enjoy feeling like I'm a B cup once in a while, so I'll wear one just farting around. It's actually helped cut down on oglers and street harassment because NOTHING is gong on in the funbag arena. Enell is THE BEST! Marry me, Enell, let's run away with our chests comfotably immobilzed into the sunset...
@apb Preach! I should get paid by Enell, I tell everyone about them!
@lavender gooms ENELL! seriously, hook'n'eye full front closure = heaven!
@femwanderluster ahem, Sprinting, not printing, for your life.